 CommentsDevious Comments Thank you for that lovely critique. I'm considering your pointers, my signature in the bottom is a style I keep throughout my works that's why I left it there and I feel comfortable with it...I'll go back in and fade it so it doesn't distract from the artwork.
And as for my watermarks lol...I'm paranaoid and I have had my work stolen, so I try to keep my work protected and still share it. The only way for me to keep it up is if I have it on. But I do understand how it can be annoying  I shall go back and tweak the stroke on the birds  oh and I do plan on doing more of those, thank you...I have another one drawn that I need to vectorise   -- "Never let yesterday's disappointments overshadow tomorrow's dreams..." |
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I love how it's full of details.. a camera here, a smilie there, it's indeed full of life, as the word says.
The colours our outstanding and giving this piece a warm and joyful atmosphere, fitting well with the rest of the concept: having fun in life and enjoying it may it be with a sport, a camera, the beach etc.
What I would do to make it better, is to remove the pink ''Faheema 09'' at the bottom.
Of course, it's good to paste your name on your artwork, but I'm seeing it 3 times now and in my eyes it's a bit too much.
I would have liked it more if you removed it, so that the background is just white with no focus on typography or anything.
Oh and perhaps work a bit more on the birds, a bit more bold would do well.
My final words? I would love it if you make more typography art like this. It's unique, refreshing and showing other people a different side of typography.
I enjoy looking at it